Wednesday, October 23, 2013
Process Analysis
On our way to Milwaukee to see The Polish Ambassador, we made a few stops to waste some time. The first stop was the Tanger Outlet Mall in the Dells. I love going shopping when I'm out of the Onalaska area to see if there is anything different at these malls. Taylor, Josh, and I shopped from store store until we reached the end of the strip mall. Most of the stores were similar to the stores in Onalaska, but it was worth the stop! As we left the Tanger Outlet, our stomach's were gargling. Denny's is right by the Tanger Outlet Mall so we had to stop, since we do not have a Denny's in the Onalaska/ La Crosse area. The inside of Denny's looked like a Diner from the Elvis Presley era. As we finish our meals, our stomach's feel like they are going to explode. We leave Denny's to head back on the road to our destination.
After a few hours of traveling busy interstates, we arrive at our hotel in Milwaukee. Our hotel was a simple, cheap hotel. No pool or anything special, just a place to stay for the night. The show is still not for a couple of hours so we decide to check out a little bit of Milwaukee. As we weave between streets in downtown Milwaukee, we pass through Marquette University. The buildings look like an old, historical school, along with most of the buildings in downtown Milwaukee. It is a very neat scene. We try and find a mall on our smartphones. We were successfull and found one about 15 minutes away from the downtown area. As the GPS leads us in the right direction, we come across a Sonic! I don't eat fast food very often, but we were on a one day vacation, and I haven't seen a Sonic since I was in Kansas. My friends also have been waiting for the day to enjoy Sonic for the first time. We pull up to a drive in similar to Rudy's In La Crosse. After examining the menu, Josh, the driver, pressed a button to order our food from his car. A few minutes after we order our food, the girls bring out a tray of food as they balance on rollerskates, also known as car hops. For not having Sonic in a long time, and for Josh and Taylor's first time there, we really enjoyed our fast food.
As we arrive at our destination, as the GPS would say, we encounter a big, two story mall. Just like at the Tanger Outlet Mall, we start at one end, except this time we started and one floor and came back on the other. This mall was a lot more fun than the Tanger Outlet Mall. There were more stores and a few new ones that we did not have at the Valley View Mall in Onalaska. This mall was so cool that the mall cops got to ride around on segways! I was totally jealous! Escalators were found in numerous spots throughout the mall along with a couple elevators. After we explored the two floors and went to all the stores we wanted to, we decided we should probably head back to the hotel and meet our friends, Nate, Jared, Travis, and Derek. Leaving the Milwaukee mall, we once again pass by sonic, and the marquette university and end up back at the hotel. Our other four friends had just gotten there, so we made it in perfect time. Now it was time to get the party started!
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ReplyDeleteI would have wanted to see the mall cops on segways, that would have been hilarious! The only thing I saw was I stopped at the store store in the third sentence, otherwise great job girl!
DeleteI really felt like I was along on each step of your trip you made it really descriptive so that I could see what you were doing. The only thing that I saw was that you had trouble with the paragraphs. I had that a few times with the first few essays also. Good essay!
DeleteI think you could have expained what the process was a bit better in the start. It was very descriptive and sounds like a fun time.
ReplyDeleteI could really see what you were doing all the way up to the concert. When you talked about the segway it made me laugh a little because I thought about the movie Paul Blart, Mall Cop. I didn't see too many errors. Good job.
ReplyDeleteSounds fun! Only a few spelling errors. Other than that very good writing. :)
ReplyDeleteI only found one error. "Taylor, Josh, and I shopped from store store until we" there should be a "to" between store and store. Other than that, reading your stories is making me want to go to some concerts. Fun story, nice job.
ReplyDeleteThis definitly sound like a fun trip. This did sound more of a descriptive essay rather then process analysis but very fun to ready. I did notice some spelling errors but good job.
ReplyDeleteI don't think you clearly understand what a process analysis is. I also noticed spelling mistakes.
ReplyDeleteThat sounds like an awesome time, I do agree with some of the others that there could be more explaining the process
ReplyDeleteAre you having trouble with paragraph formatting? Are you writing your posts on the blog or are you cutting and pasting from Word?
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